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JPR 23-04-11-01 – Comments/Responses Tracking Table
PROJECT IDENTIFIER – LEAP 2022-03/Mission Trails at Lemon Project
REVIEWER – Carol Thompson
DOCUMENTATION REC’D – JPR submittal materials provided by the Permittee included a JPR Application Form (April 6, 2023); a LEAP MSHCP Consistency Findings (April 3, 2023) and a General Biological Assessment
for APNs 370050-019, -020, and -032 (Assessment; May 2023) prepared by Hernandez Environmental Services; and GIS shapefiles.
The Permittee/Applicant must provide a summary response to each comment in the Table below, including the document name and section/page# where the revised information relative to the response can be found.
If the Permittee/Applicant chooses to do so, responses may be provided in the Table only in advance of revising the JPR supporting documents. However, without the revised documentation accompanying the Table
as a way of providing context, this may add time to the review. When revised documents are submitted, they should be provided in tracked changes that clearly reflect the summary response below. If revised
documents (with tracked changes) are submitted in Word, revised Figures should also be provided separately. The intent of this Table is to provide a forum for the Permittee/Applicant to address comments up front,
if needed, particularly if the Permittee/Applicant would like to further discuss any of the comments in advance of revising the supporting documents. Note that each time responses and/or revised JPR supporting
documents are sent back to RCA, the 14-day review clock begins again. We also strongly encourage the Permittee/Applicant to reach out to the RCA reviewer or arrange a meeting early on if there are any questions
regarding the comments or any complex issues related to the JPR.
For the purposes of this JPR review by the RCA, these comments are only applicable to areas within the Criteria Cells and/or where areas outside of Cells may result in issues to resources adjacent to the Criteria Cells.
Any additional MSHCP resources outside of the Cells will continue to be reviewed for MSHCP consistency by the Wildlife Agencies.
The Permittee/Applicant must also fill out (whether new or update to existing code) the column for Response Codes using one of the following: A=Comment Addressed; B=Comment Partially Addressed; C=Comment
Not Addressed. If a response was not provided or was only partially provided, please provide a justification regarding why the comment was not fully addressed.
Shading = Comment completed.
Additional Notes for the Permittee /Applicant:
• It is recommended that a tracked changes version of resubmitted documentation be provided along with this Table in order to facilitate reviews.
• The dates on any revised documents should be updated with each submittal to reflect most recent submittals and to avoid version control issues.
• Please also note that additional comments may be provided after review of the requested/revised information.
• The Table and revised JPR documentation, OR the Table-only (if the Permittee/Applicant chooses this latter approach), should be sent back to the RCA reviewer via email (Carol Thompson; cthompson@dudek.com). Please
also copy Tricia Campbell (tcampbell@rctc.org), Leslie Levy (llevy@rctc.org), and Britney Schultz (bschultz@dudek.com) on the email.
Round 1 – RCA Reviewer Comments
(Submitted 04-24-23)
Response
Codes
Round 1 – Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 05-24-23)
Round 2 – RCA Reviewer
Comments
(Submitted 06-08-23)
Round 2 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 06-13-23)
Response
Codes
Round 3 – RCA Reviewer
Comments
(Submitted 06-27-23)
Response
Codes
Round 3 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Please include date
submitted back to the
RCA)
Project Description (PD)
PD-1. Because the RCA only reviews
actions within Criteria Cells and the
proposed project is located both inside
and outside of a Criteria Cells, total
B The Assessment has been revised to
describe areas within and outside of the
Criteria Cells. In addition, all Assessment
Comment Partially Addressed
PD-1. Thank you for providing
impact acreages inside and outside
Table 1 has been
revised to reflect
Section 5.1.
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project area acreages (e.g., existing
vegetation/land use acreages, impact
acreages, etc.) should be broken out as
within the Criteria Cells and outside the
Criteria Cells and be separated by on-site
and off-site acreages, as applicable. A
table is the most concise way to describe
these acreages. If the proposed project
does not include off-site impacts, this
needs to be clearly stated. According to
the GIS shapefiles provided, the total
proposed development is 16.97 acres. Of
the 16.97-acre development, 0.3-acre
occurs with/in Criteria Cell 5136. Revise
the JPR Application and Assessment with
this information.
Additionally, all exhibits should clearly
depict the areas within the Cell(s) and
outside the Cell(s).
exhibits have been revised to depict
criteria cells
of the Criteria Cell in a table
format. However, Assessment,
Table 1 "Project Site Acreages," has
a typo. The total acreage outside of
the Cell is listed as 16.97 acres. The
combined total Project Impact
Acreage Outside of the Cell (16.97
acres) and the Acreage Within the
Cell (0.30 acre) totals 17.27 acres,
which exceeds the total project site
acreage of 17.21 acres. In the
Assessment, Section 5.1 "Impacts
to Existing Habitats," it states that
16.67 acres is the total acres
outside of MSHCP Criteria Cells.
Please revise Table 1 accordingly to
be consistent with the text in
Section 5.1, as applicable.
PD-2. The JPR Application lists the total
acres planned for development total
17.21 acres; however, the GIS shapefiles
provided and the Assessment both
include a 16.97-acre development.
Furthermore, the Assessment states in
Sections 5.5 and 6.1 that the project
would avoid 0.07-acre containing
riparian/riverine resources within the
northern portion of the project. However,
0.07ac and 16.97ac do not total 17.21ac.
All JPR supporting documentation and
the GIS shapefiles need to accurately and
consistently report the total JPR project
acreages (on-site and off-site
permanent/temporary impacts,
avoidance, and/or proposed
conservation, as applicable).
A See revised GIS shapefiles. Comment Addressed - - - - -
PD-3. The Assessment does not describe
whether the proposed project includes
any staging areas. It is assumed all
construction staging will occur within the
development footprint; however, this
needs to be clearly stated in the
Assessment. In addition, while it is
assumed the entire 16.97-acre site would
be permanently impacted, this also needs
to be clearly stated. Note that if the
proposed project does not include any
proposed temporary impacts, this should
be clearly stated as well. Revise
accordingly.
A The Assessment has been revised to
include a discussion of permanent,
temporary, and offsite impacts.
Comment Addressed - - - - -
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- − − − − − PD-4. Assessment, Section 5.1 states,
“Approximately 0.24 of the northern
portion of the site, including 0.07
acre of riparian/riverine areas, will
not be impacted by project
development;” however, a GIS
shapefile for the 0.24-acre area was
not provided. Please provide GIS
shapefiles that clearly label and
depict the 16.97-acre proposed
permanent development and the
0.24-acre avoidance area.
A Shapefiles labeled “0.24-
Acre Avoidance Area” and
“16.97-Acre Proposed
Permanent Development
Area” have been sent to
RCA.
6.1.2 Riparian/Riverine (RIP/RIV)
The following comments, relevant to
Section 6.1.2 resources, are primarily
directed at project areas located outside
of Cells. While these areas located
outside of Cells are outside of RCA’s
purview, addressing these comments is
important for demonstrating overall
MSHCP consistency. Also note that the
Wildlife Agencies will be reviewing all
project areas for MSHCP consistency,
both inside and outside of Cells.
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RIP/RIV-1. Assessment, Section 2.1.2,
should be updated to separate out the
total acreage of MSHCP riparian/riverine
resources as within the Criteria Cell and
outside the Criteria Cell. If MSHCP
riparian/riverine resources do not occur
within the Criteria Cells, this also would
need to be clearly stated and reflected in
all applicable exhibits. Refer to Comment
PD-1 above.
A
Section 2.1.2 of the Assessment has
been revised to state that onsite
riparian/riverine areas are located
outside of MSHCP Criteria Cells.
Comment Addressed − - − − −
RIP/RIV-2. Assessment, page 5, states,
“The northwestern corner of the project
site contains approximately 0.07 acre
located below the CDFW
jurisdictional elevation of 1,265 feet
above mean sea-level (AMSL) that would
be considered
riparian/riverine areas as defined in
Section 6.1.2 if the Western Riverside
MSHCP.”
If riparian or riverine resources are
proposed for avoidance, 0.07 acres, the
Assessment should include a
commitment to place a conservation
easement or deed restriction over the
area in order to demonstrate that the
area will be protected in perpetuity and
A Section 6 of the Assessment has been
revised to state that no
riparian/riverine functions and values
would be protected by conserving the
avoided area below 1265’ elevation. In
addition, Assessment exhibits have
been revised to depict riparian/riverine
resources in relation to MSHCP Criteria
Cells and project avoidance of
riparian/riverine areas.
Comment Addressed
Informational only. Because the
RCA only reviews actions within
Criteria Cells and the proposed
project is located both inside and
outside of Criteria Cells, and
because Section 6.1.2
riparian/riverine resources are
located outside of the Criteria Cell,
any MSHCP resources outside of
the Cells will continue to be
reviewed for MSHCP consistency by
the Wildlife Agencies.
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should include when this will be
completed. Per Section 6.1.2 of the
MSHCP, “If an avoidance alternative is
selected, measures shall be incorporated
into the project design to ensure the
long-term conservation of the area to be
avoided, and associated functions and
values, through the use of deed
restriction, conservation easement, or
other appropriate mechanisms. If an
avoidance alternative is not feasible, a
practicable alternative that minimizes
direct and indirect effects to
riparian/riverine areas and vernal pools
and associated functions and values to
the greatest extent possible shall be
selected. Those impacts that are
unavoidable shall be mitigated such that
the lost functions and values as they
relate to Covered Species are replaced as
set forth under the [DBESP].” Based on
this, note that if the proposed project
cannot demonstrate how it will ensure
the long-term conservation and
sustainability of the existing resource, all
or a portion of the riparian/riverine
resource(s) may also be considered
permanently impacted and will require
additional mitigation and require
preparation of a DBESP report.
Additionally, although the Assessment
exhibits depict the “Area Below 1,265”
elevation” exhibits should clearly depict
the areas with Riparian/Riverine in the
Cell(s) and outside the Cell(s) and should
clearly label and depict the “avoidance”
area on all appliable exhibits and within
the GIS shapefiles. Revise accordingly.
RIP/RIV-3. Related to Comment RIP/RIV-
2 above, the Assessment should provide
details regarding the proposed avoidance
buffer (e.g., total buffer width), and a
solid justification that this buffer would
not impact hydrology, downstream
sedimentation, water quality, etc. should
be provided. Indirect impacts should also
be fully discussed. Revise accordingly.
A Section 6 of the Assessment has been
revised to include a discussion of
avoidance buffer.
Comment Addressed − - - -
6.1.2 Riparian Birds (RB)
RB-1. Provide a clear description of the
criteria used to determine whether
suitable habitat for riparian bird species
A Section 6 of the Assessment has been
revised to include a discussion of the
criteria used to determine
Comment Addressed − - - - -
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(including least Bell’s vireo [LBVI],
southwestern willow flycatcher [SWFL],
or yellow-billed cuckoo [YBCU]) is present
on the project site should be included the
Assessment.
presence/absence of habitat for
riparian bird species.
6.1.2 Vernal Pools (VP)
VP-1. While the Assessment, Section
4.1.3, does state that state that fairy
shrimp are absent, the Assessment needs
to clearly describe the criteria used to
determine whether there are vernal
pools on the project site (inside and
outside of the Criteria Cell.) Vernal pool
assessments are needed to identify and
map resources that fit the MSHCP
definition of a vernal pool. The
Assessment should provide a description
of the site conditions to support a
determination of the presence/absence
of vernal pools. The following should be
considered: the watershed supporting
vernal pool hydrology, length of time the
area exhibits upland and wetland
characteristics (inundated or not),
evidence for the persistence of wetness
using historic information (e.g., aerials),
vegetation, soils, drainage characteristics,
uses to which the site has been
subjected, and weather and hydrologic
records.
Update the Assessment accordingly as all
projects need to assess
presence/absence of vernal pools, in
addition to other non-vernal pool
features that may provide suitable
habitat for fairy shrimp.
A Section 6 of the Assessment has been
revised to expand upon the vernal
pool/fairy shrimp discussion.
Comment Addressed − - - - -
6.1.2 Fairy Shrimp (FS)
FS-1. Assessment Section 6.1 states, “The
site was evaluated as described in the
USFWS Survey Guidelines for the Listed
Large Branchiopods (May 31, 2016).”
Please note fairy shrimp assessments and
surveys must be conducted pursuant to
the most currently accepted protocol
(i.e., USFWS Survey Guidelines for the
Listed Large Branchiopods [USFWS
2017]).” Revise accordingly.
A Section 6 of the Assessment has been
revised to reference the most recent
protocol.
Comment Addressed − - - - -
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6.3.2 Additional Survey Needs -
Burrowing Owl (BUOW)
- − − − − − BUOW-1. Assessment, Section 2.1,
states, “A habitat assessment was
conducted for burrowing owl
following Step I of the Burrowing
Owl Survey Instructions for the
Western Riverside MSHCP. The
habitat assessment determined that
the site does not provide suitable
habitat for the species. Therefore,
Step 2 of the Western Riverside
MSHCP Burrowing Owl Survey
protocol is not required.”
Assessment, Section 4.1.3 further
states that, “A habitat assessment
conducted on the site determined
that no suitable habitat is present
due to the lack of small mammal
burrows and manmade structures
that could be utilized as burrows,
such as earthen berms; cement,
asphalt, rock, or wood debris piles;
or openings beneath cement or
asphalt pavement. This species is not
present.”
Please note that based on the
information provided in the
Assessment, suitable burrowing owl
habitat is present (e.g., open
vegetation consisting of ruderal
habitat, etc.); therefore, a Step II-A
Focused Burrow Survey is required.
Furthermore, according to the
MSHCP Burrowing Owl Survey
Instructions (RCA 2006), “…. lack of
identifying burrows during the
habitat assessment does not negate
the need for the systematic search
for burrows included as part of the
Step II survey instructions. If
burrowing owl habitat is not present
on-site (i.e., if the site is completely
covered by chaparral, cement or
asphalt) Step II of the survey is not
necessary.”
The Assessment should include a
clear description that follows the
A Assessment revised to
include description of Step
II-A survey.
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methods (i.e., during the breeding
season from March 1-August 31 and
within certain times/conditions) as
described in the MSHCP Burrowing
Owl Survey Instructions (RCA 2006).
Methodology should be separated
into discussions for Step I (Habitat
Assessment), Step II-A (Focused
Burrow Survey), and Step II-B
(Focused Burrowing Owl Surveys), as
applicable. Describe in detail how
each Step was followed (e.g., if a
suitable habitat is identified in a Step
I Habitat Assessment, then a Step II-
A focused burrow search (systematic
search) was conducted following the
MSHCP Burrowing Owl Survey
Instructions). Revise accordingly.