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JPR 23-04-11-01 – Comments/Responses Tracking Table
PROJECT IDENTIFIER – LEAP 2022-03/Mission Trails at Lemon Project
REVIEWER – Carol Thompson
DOCUMENTATION REC’D – JPR submittal materials provided by the Permittee included a JPR Application Form (April 6, 2023); a LEAP MSHCP Consistency Findings (April 3, 2023) and a General Biological Assessment
for APNs 370050-019, -020, and -032 (Assessment; July 2023) prepared by Hernandez Environmental Services; and GIS shapefiles.
The Permittee/Applicant must provide a summary response to each comment in the Table below, including the document name and section/page# where the revised information relative to the response can be found.
If the Permittee/Applicant chooses to do so, responses may be provided in the Table only in advance of revising the JPR supporting documents. However, without the revised documentation accompanying the Table
as a way of providing context, this may add time to the review. When revised documents are submitted, they should be provided in tracked changes that clearly reflect the summary response below. If revised
documents (with tracked changes) are submitted in Word, revised Figures should also be provided separately. The intent of this Table is to provide a forum for the Permittee/Applicant to address comments up front,
if needed, particularly if the Permittee/Applicant would like to further discuss any of the comments in advance of revising the supporting documents. Note that each time responses and/or revised JPR supporting
documents are sent back to RCA, the 14-day review clock begins again. We also strongly encourage the Permittee/Applicant to reach out to the RCA reviewer or arrange a meeting early on if there are any questions
regarding the comments or any complex issues related to the JPR.
For the purposes of this JPR review by the RCA, these comments are only applicable to areas within the Criteria Cells and/or where areas outside of Cells may result in issues to resources adjacent to the Criteria Cells.
Any additional MSHCP resources outside of the Cells will continue to be reviewed for MSHCP consistency by the Wildlife Agencies.
The Permittee/Applicant must also fill out (whether new or update to existing code) the column for Response Codes using one of the following: A=Comment Addressed; B=Comment Partially Addressed; C=Comment
Not Addressed. If a response was not provided or was only partially provided, please provide a justification regarding why the comment was not fully addressed.
Shading = Comment completed.
Additional Notes for the Permittee /Applicant:
• It is recommended that a tracked changes version of resubmitted documentation be provided along with this Table in order to facilitate reviews.
• The dates on any revised documents should be updated with each submittal to reflect most recent submittals and to avoid version control issues.
• Please also note that additional comments may be provided after review of the requested/revised information.
• The Table and revised JPR documentation, OR the Table-only (if the Permittee/Applicant chooses this latter approach), should be sent back to the RCA reviewer via email (Carol Thompson; cthompson@dudek.com). Please
also copy Tricia Campbell (tcampbell@rctc.org), Leslie Levy (llevy@rctc.org), and Britney Schultz (bschultz@dudek.com) on the email.
Round 1 – RCA
Reviewer Comments
(Submitted 04-24-23)
Response
Codes
Round 1 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 05-24-23)
Round 2 – RCA
Reviewer
Comments
(Submitted 06-08-
23)
Round 2 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 06-13-
23)
Response
Codes
Round 3 – RCA
Reviewer
Comments
(Submitted 06-27-
23)
Response
Codes
Round 3 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 07-06-23)
Round 4 – RCA
Reviewer
Comments
(Submitted 07-18-
23)
Response
Codes
Round 4 –
Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Submitted 07-25-
2023)
Project Description (PD)
PD-1. Because the RCA
only reviews actions
within Criteria Cells and
the proposed project is
B The Assessment has been
revised to describe areas
within and outside of the
Criteria Cells. In addition,
Comment Partially
Addressed
Table 1 has been
revised to reflect
Section 5.1.
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located both inside and
outside of a Criteria Cells,
total project area
acreages (e.g., existing
vegetation/land use
acreages, impact
acreages, etc.) should be
broken out as within the
Criteria Cells and outside
the Criteria Cells and be
separated by on-site and
off-site acreages, as
applicable. A table is the
most concise way to
describe these acreages. If
the proposed project does
not include off-site
impacts, this needs to be
clearly stated. According
to the GIS shapefiles
provided, the total
proposed development is
16.97 acres. Of the 16.97-
acre development, 0.3-
acre occurs with/in
Criteria Cell 5136. Revise
the JPR Application and
Assessment with this
information.
Additionally, all exhibits
should clearly depict the
areas within the Cell(s)
and outside the Cell(s).
all Assessment exhibits
have been revised to
depict criteria cells
PD-1. Thank you for
providing impact
acreages inside and
outside of the
Criteria Cell in a
table format.
However,
Assessment, Table 1
"Project Site
Acreages," has a
typo. The total
acreage outside of
the Cell is listed as
16.97 acres. The
combined total
Project Impact
Acreage Outside of
the Cell (16.97
acres) and the
Acreage Within the
Cell (0.30 acre)
totals 17.27 acres,
which exceeds the
total project site
acreage of 17.21
acres. In the
Assessment, Section
5.1 "Impacts to
Existing Habitats," it
states that 16.67
acres is the total
acres outside of
MSHCP Criteria
Cells. Please revise
Table 1 accordingly
to be consistent
with the text in
Section 5.1, as
applicable.
PD-2. The JPR Application
lists the total acres
planned for development
total 17.21 acres;
however, the GIS
shapefiles provided and
the Assessment both
include a 16.97-acre
development.
Furthermore, the
Assessment states in
A See revised GIS shapefiles. Comment Addressed - - - - - - - -
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Sections 5.5 and 6.1 that
the project would avoid
0.07-acre containing
riparian/riverine
resources within the
northern portion of the
project. However, 0.07ac
and 16.97ac do not total
17.21ac. All JPR
supporting
documentation and the
GIS shapefiles need to
accurately and
consistently report the
total JPR project acreages
(on-site and off-site
permanent/temporary
impacts, avoidance,
and/or proposed
conservation, as
applicable).
PD-3. The Assessment
does not describe
whether the proposed
project includes any
staging areas. It is
assumed all construction
staging will occur within
the development
footprint; however, this
needs to be clearly stated
in the Assessment. In
addition, while it is
assumed the entire 16.97-
acre site would be
permanently impacted,
this also needs to be
clearly stated. Note that
if the proposed project
does not include any
proposed temporary
impacts, this should be
clearly stated as well.
Revise accordingly.
A The Assessment has been
revised to include a
discussion of permanent,
temporary, and offsite
impacts.
Comment Addressed - - - - - - - -
- − − − − − PD-4. Assessment,
Section 5.1 states,
“Approximately 0.24
of the northern
portion of the site,
including 0.07
acre of
riparian/riverine
A Shapefiles labeled
“0.24-Acre Avoidance
Area” and “16.97-Acre
Proposed Permanent
Development Area”
have been sent to RCA.
Comment Addressed - -
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areas, will not be
impacted by project
development;”
however, a GIS
shapefile for the
0.24-acre area was
not provided. Please
provide GIS
shapefiles that
clearly label and
depict the 16.97-acre
proposed permanent
development and the
0.24-acre avoidance
area.
6.1.2 Riparian/Riverine
(RIP/RIV)
The following comments,
relevant to Section 6.1.2
resources, are primarily
directed at project areas
located outside of Cells.
While these areas located
outside of Cells are
outside of RCA’s purview,
addressing these
comments is important
for demonstrating overall
MSHCP consistency. Also
note that the Wildlife
Agencies will be reviewing
all project areas for
MSHCP consistency, both
inside and outside of
Cells.
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RIP/RIV-1. Assessment,
Section 2.1.2, should be
updated to separate out
the total acreage of
MSHCP riparian/riverine
resources as within the
Criteria Cell and outside
the Criteria Cell. If MSHCP
riparian/riverine
resources do not occur
within the Criteria Cells,
this also would need to be
clearly stated and
reflected in all applicable
exhibits. Refer to
Comment PD-1 above.
A
Section 2.1.2 of the
Assessment has been
revised to state that
onsite riparian/riverine
areas are located outside
of MSHCP Criteria Cells.
Comment
Addressed
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RIP/RIV-2. Assessment,
page 5, states, “The
northwestern corner of
the project site contains
approximately 0.07 acre
located below the CDFW
jurisdictional elevation of
1,265 feet above mean
sea-level (AMSL) that
would be considered
riparian/riverine areas as
defined in Section 6.1.2 if
the Western Riverside
MSHCP.”
If riparian or riverine
resources are proposed
for avoidance, 0.07 acres,
the Assessment should
include a commitment to
place a conservation
easement or deed
restriction over the area
in order to demonstrate
that the area will be
protected in perpetuity
and should include when
this will be completed. Per
Section 6.1.2 of the
MSHCP, “If an avoidance
alternative is selected,
measures shall be
incorporated into the
project design to ensure
the long-term
conservation of the area
to be avoided, and
associated functions and
values, through the use of
deed restriction,
conservation easement,
or other appropriate
mechanisms. If an
avoidance alternative is
not feasible, a practicable
alternative that minimizes
direct and indirect effects
to riparian/riverine areas
and vernal pools and
associated functions and
values to the greatest
extent possible shall be
selected. Those impacts
A Section 6 of the
Assessment has been
revised to state that no
riparian/riverine functions
and values would be
protected by conserving
the avoided area below
1265’ elevation. In
addition, Assessment
exhibits have been revised
to depict riparian/riverine
resources in relation to
MSHCP Criteria Cells and
project avoidance of
riparian/riverine areas.
Comment Addressed
Informational only.
Because the RCA
only reviews actions
within Criteria Cells
and the proposed
project is located
both inside and
outside of Criteria
Cells, and because
Section 6.1.2
riparian/riverine
resources are
located outside of
the Criteria Cell, any
MSHCP resources
outside of the Cells
will continue to be
reviewed for
MSHCP consistency
by the Wildlife
Agencies.
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that are unavoidable shall
be mitigated such that the
lost functions and values
as they relate to Covered
Species are replaced as
set forth under the
[DBESP].” Based on this,
note that if the proposed
project cannot
demonstrate how it will
ensure the long-term
conservation and
sustainability of the
existing resource, all or a
portion of the
riparian/riverine
resource(s) may also be
considered permanently
impacted and will require
additional mitigation and
require preparation of a
DBESP report.
Additionally, although the
Assessment exhibits
depict the “Area Below
1,265” elevation” exhibits
should clearly depict the
areas with
Riparian/Riverine in the
Cell(s) and outside the
Cell(s) and should clearly
label and depict the
“avoidance” area on all
appliable exhibits and
within the GIS shapefiles.
Revise accordingly.
RIP/RIV-3. Related to
Comment RIP/RIV-2
above, the Assessment
should provide details
regarding the proposed
avoidance buffer (e.g.,
total buffer width), and a
solid justification that this
buffer would not impact
hydrology, downstream
sedimentation, water
quality, etc. should be
provided. Indirect impacts
should also be fully
A Section 6 of the
Assessment has been
revised to include a
discussion of avoidance
buffer.
Comment
Addressed
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discussed. Revise
accordingly.
6.1.2 Riparian Birds (RB)
RB-1. Provide a clear
description of the criteria
used to determine
whether suitable habitat
for riparian bird species
(including least Bell’s
vireo [LBVI], southwestern
willow flycatcher [SWFL],
or yellow-billed cuckoo
[YBCU]) is present on the
project site should be
included the Assessment.
A Section 6 of the
Assessment has been
revised to include a
discussion of the criteria
used to determine
presence/absence of
habitat for riparian bird
species.
Comment
Addressed
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6.1.2 Vernal Pools (VP)
VP-1. While the
Assessment, Section 4.1.3,
does state that state that
fairy shrimp are absent,
the Assessment needs to
clearly describe the
criteria used to determine
whether there are vernal
pools on the project site
(inside and outside of the
Criteria Cell.) Vernal pool
assessments are needed
to identify and map
resources that fit the
MSHCP definition of a
vernal pool. The
Assessment should
provide a description of
the site conditions to
support a determination
of the presence/absence
of vernal pools. The
following should be
considered: the
watershed supporting
vernal pool hydrology,
length of time the area
exhibits upland and
wetland characteristics
(inundated or not),
evidence for the
persistence of wetness
using historic information
A Section 6 of the
Assessment has been
revised to expand upon
the vernal pool/fairy
shrimp discussion.
Comment
Addressed
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(e.g., aerials), vegetation,
soils, drainage
characteristics, uses to
which the site has been
subjected, and weather
and hydrologic records.
Update the Assessment
accordingly as all projects
need to assess
presence/absence of
vernal pools, in addition
to other non-vernal pool
features that may provide
suitable habitat for fairy
shrimp.
6.1.2 Fairy Shrimp (FS)
FS-1. Assessment Section
6.1 states, “The site was
evaluated as described in
the USFWS Survey
Guidelines for the Listed
Large Branchiopods (May
31, 2016).” Please note
fairy shrimp assessments
and surveys must be
conducted pursuant to
the most currently
accepted protocol (i.e.,
USFWS Survey Guidelines
for the Listed Large
Branchiopods [USFWS
2017]).” Revise
accordingly.
A Section 6 of the
Assessment has been
revised to reference the
most recent protocol.
Comment
Addressed
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6.3.2 Additional Survey
Needs - Burrowing Owl
(BUOW)
- − − − − − BUOW-1.
Assessment, Section
2.1, states, “A
habitat assessment
was conducted for
burrowing owl
following Step I of
the Burrowing Owl
Survey Instructions
for the Western
Riverside MSHCP.
The habitat
A Assessment revised to
include description of
Step II-A survey.
Comment Partially
Addressed
Thank you for
providing the
additional survey
methodology for the
Step II—A Focused
Burrow Survey that
was conducted on
May 1, 2023.
However, the
Assessment is lacking
A Assessment revised to
add new Figure 6 which
shows suitable habitat,
150-meter (500-foot)
buffer, and the transect
locations. A reference to
Figure 6 was added to
the burrowing owl
discussion on pages 20
and 21.
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assessment
determined that the
site does not provide
suitable habitat for
the species.
Therefore, Step 2 of
the Western
Riverside MSHCP
Burrowing Owl
Survey protocol is
not required.”
Assessment, Section
4.1.3 further states
that, “A habitat
assessment
conducted on the
site determined that
no suitable habitat is
present due to the
lack of small
mammal burrows
and manmade
structures that could
be utilized as
burrows, such as
earthen berms;
cement, asphalt,
rock, or wood debris
piles; or openings
beneath cement or
asphalt pavement.
This species is not
present.”
Please note that
based on the
information provided
in the Assessment,
suitable burrowing
owl habitat is
present (e.g., open
vegetation consisting
of ruderal habitat,
etc.); therefore, a
Step II-A Focused
Burrow Survey is
required.
Furthermore,
according to the
MSHCP Burrowing
a figure that shows
suitable habitat,
transects, and the
150-meter buffer. In
accordance with the
MSHCP Burrowing
Owl Survey
Instructions (RCA
2006), if burrowing
owl habitat occurs on
site, the extent of
suitable habitat
including buffer,
transect locations
should be provided.
Revise the
Assessment
applicable text
accordingly and
provide a figure (see
email attached
example) that clearly
depicts suitable
habitat, the survey
area including the
150-meter survey
buffer, and the
transect lines
followed during the
burrow survey.
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Owl Survey
Instructions (RCA
2006), “…. lack of
identifying burrows
during the habitat
assessment does not
negate the need for
the systematic
search for burrows
included as part of
the Step II survey
instructions. If
burrowing owl
habitat is not present
on-site (i.e., if the
site is completely
covered by
chaparral, cement or
asphalt) Step II of the
survey is not
necessary.”
The Assessment
should include a
clear description that
follows the methods
(i.e., during the
breeding season
from March 1-August
31 and within certain
times/conditions) as
described in the
MSHCP Burrowing
Owl Survey
Instructions (RCA
2006). Methodology
should be separated
into discussions for
Step I (Habitat
Assessment), Step II-
A (Focused Burrow
Survey), and Step II-B
(Focused Burrowing
Owl Surveys), as
applicable. Describe
in detail how each
Step was followed
(e.g., if a suitable
habitat is identified
in a Step I Habitat
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Assessment, then a
Step II-A focused
burrow search
(systematic search)
was conducted
following the MSHCP
Burrowing Owl
Survey Instructions).
Revise accordingly.