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JPR 23-04-11-01 – Comments/Responses Tracking Table
PROJECT IDENTIFIER – LEAP 2022-03/Mission Trails at Lemon Project
REVIEWER – Carol Thompson
DOCUMENTATION REC’D – JPR submittal materials provided by the Permittee included a JPR Application Form (April 6, 2023); a
LEAP MSHCP Consistency Findings (April 3, 2023) and a General Biological Assessment for APNs 370050-019, -020, and -032
(Assessment; March 2023) prepared by Hernandez Environmental Services; and GIS shapefiles.
The Permittee/Applicant must provide a summary response to each comment in the Table below, including the document name
and section/page# where the revised information relative to the response can be found. If the Permittee/Applicant chooses to do
so, responses may be provided in the Table only in advance of revising the JPR supporting documents. However, without the
revised documentation accompanying the Table as a way of providing context, this may add time to the review. When revised
documents are submitted, they should be provided in tracked changes that clearly reflect the summary response below. If revised
documents (with tracked changes) are submitted in Word, revised Figures should also be provided separately. The intent of this
Table is to provide a forum for the Permittee/Applicant to address comments up front, if needed, particularly if the
Permittee/Applicant would like to further discuss any of the comments in advance of revising the supporting documents. Note
that each time responses and/or revised JPR supporting documents are sent back to RCA, the 14-day review clock begins again.
We also strongly encourage the Permittee/Applicant to reach out to the RCA reviewer or arrange a meeting early on if there are
any questions regarding the comments or any complex issues related to the JPR.
For the purposes of this JPR review by the RCA, these comments are only applicable to areas within the Criteria Cell(s) and/or
where areas outside of Cells may result in issues to resources adjacent to the Criteria Cell(s). Any additional MSHCP resources
outside of the Cells will continue to be reviewed for MSHCP consistency by the Wildlife Agencies.
The Permittee/Applicant must also fill out (whether new or update to existing code) the column for Response Codes using one of
the following: A=Comment Addressed; B=Comment Partially Addressed; C=Comment Not Addressed. If a response was not
provided or was only partially provided, please provide a justification regarding why the comment was not fully addressed.
Shading = Comment completed.
Additional Notes for the Permittee /Applicant:
• It is recommended that a tracked changes version of resubmitted documentation be provided along with this Table in order to
facilitate reviews.
• The dates on any revised documents should be updated with each submittal to reflect most recent submittals and to avoid
version control issues.
• Please also note that additional comments may be provided after review of the requested/revised information.
• The Table and revised JPR documentation, OR the Table-only (if the Permittee/Applicant chooses this latter approach), should be
sent back to the RCA reviewer via email (Carol Thompson; cthompson@rctc.org). Please also copy Leslie Levy (llevy@rctc.org),
Tricia Campbell (tcampbell@rctc.org), and Britney Schultz (bschultz@dudek.com) on the email.
Round 1 – RCA Reviewer Comments
(Submitted 04-24-23)
Response
Codes
Round 1 – Permittee/Applicant
Responses Summary
(Please include date submitted back to the RCA)
Project Description (PD)
PD-1. Because the RCA only reviews actions within
Criteria Cells and the proposed project is located both
inside and outside of a Criteria Cells, total project area
acreages (e.g., existing vegetation/land use acreages,
impact acreages, etc.) should be broken out as within
the Criteria Cells and outside the Criteria Cells and be
separated by on-site and off-site acreages, as
applicable. A table is the most concise way to describe
these acreages. If the proposed project does not
include off-site impacts, this needs to be clearly stated.
According to the GIS shapefiles provided, the total
proposed development is 16.97 acres. Of the 16.97-
acre development, 0.3-acre occurs with/in Criteria Cell
5136. Revise the JPR Application and Assessment with
this information.
Additionally, all exhibits should clearly depict the areas
within the Cell(s) and outside the Cell(s).
PD-2. The JPR Application lists the total acres planned
for development total 17.21 acres; however, the GIS
shapefiles provided and the Assessment both include a
16.97-acre development. Furthermore, the Assessment
states in Sections 5.5 and 6.1 that the project would
avoid 0.07-acre containing riparian/riverine resources
within the northern portion of the project. However,
0.07ac and 16.97ac do not total 17.21ac. All JPR
supporting documentation and the GIS shapefiles need
to accurately and consistently report the total JPR
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project acreages (on-site and off-site
permanent/temporary impacts, avoidance, and/or
proposed conservation, as applicable).
PD-3. The Assessment does not describe whether the
proposed project includes any staging areas. It is
assumed all construction staging will occur within the
development footprint; however, this needs to be
clearly stated in the Assessment. In addition, while it is
assumed the entire 16.97-acre site would be
permanently impacted, this also needs to be clearly
stated. Note that if the proposed project does not
include any proposed temporary impacts, this should
be clearly stated as well. Revise accordingly.
6.1.2 Riparian/Riverine (RIP/RIV)
The following comments, relevant to Section 6.1.2
resources, are primarily directed at project areas
located outside of Cells. While these areas located
outside of Cells are outside of RCA’s purview,
addressing these comments is important for
demonstrating overall MSHCP consistency. Also note
that the Wildlife Agencies will be reviewing all project
areas for MSHCP consistency, both inside and outside
of Cells.
RIP/RIV-1. Assessment, Section 2.1.2, should be
updated to separate out the total acreage of MSHCP
riparian/riverine resources as within the Criteria Cell
and outside the Criteria Cell. If MSHCP riparian/riverine
resources do not occur within the Criteria Cells, this
also would need to be clearly stated and reflected in all
applicable exhibits. Refer to Comment PD-1 above.
RIP/RIV-2. Assessment, page 5, states, “The
northwestern corner of the project site contains
approximately 0.07 acre located below the CDFW
jurisdictional elevation of 1,265 feet above mean sea-
level (AMSL) that would be considered
riparian/riverine areas as defined in Section 6.1.2 if the
Western Riverside MSHCP.”
If riparian or riverine resources are proposed for
avoidance, 0.07 acres, the Assessment should include a
commitment to place a conservation easement or deed
restriction over the area in order to demonstrate that
the area will be protected in perpetuity and should
include when this will be completed. Per Section 6.1.2
of the MSHCP, “If an avoidance alternative is selected,
measures shall be incorporated into the project design
to ensure the long-term conservation of the area to be
avoided, and associated functions and values, through
the use of deed restriction, conservation easement, or
other appropriate mechanisms. If an avoidance
alternative is not feasible, a practicable alternative that
minimizes direct and indirect effects to riparian/riverine
areas and vernal pools and associated functions and
values to the greatest extent possible shall be selected.
Those impacts that are unavoidable shall be mitigated
such that the lost functions and values as they relate to
Covered Species are replaced as set forth under the
[DBESP].” Based on this, note that if the proposed
project cannot demonstrate how it will ensure the long-
term conservation and sustainability of the existing
resource, all or a portion of the riparian/riverine
resource(s) may also be considered permanently
impacted and will require additional mitigation and
require preparation of a DBESP report.
Additionally, although the Assessment exhibits depict
the “Area Below 1,265” elevation” exhibits should
clearly depict the areas with Riparian/Riverine in the
Cell(s) and outside the Cell(s) and should clearly label
and depict the “avoidance” area on all appliable
exhibits and within the GIS shapefiles. Revise
accordingly.
RIP/RIV-3. Related to Comment RIP/RIV-2 above, the
Assessment should provide details regarding the
proposed avoidance buffer (e.g., total buffer width),
and a solid justification that this buffer would not
impact hydrology, downstream sedimentation, water
quality, etc. should be provided. Indirect impacts should
also be fully discussed. Revise accordingly.
6.1.2 Riparian Birds (RB)
RB-1. Provide a clear description of the criteria used to
determine whether suitable habitat for riparian bird
species (including least Bell’s vireo [LBVI], southwestern
willow flycatcher [SWFL], or yellow-billed cuckoo
[YBCU]) is present on the project site should be included
the Assessment.
6.1.2 Vernal Pools (VP)
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VP-1. While the Assessment, Section 4.1.3, does state
that state that fairy shrimp are absent, the Assessment
needs to clearly describe the criteria used to determine
whether there are vernal pools on the project site
(inside and outside of the Criteria Cell.) Vernal pool
assessments are needed to identify and map resources
that fit the MSHCP definition of a vernal pool. The
Assessment should provide a description of the site
conditions to support a determination of the
presence/absence of vernal pools. The following should
be considered: the watershed supporting vernal pool
hydrology, length of time the area exhibits upland and
wetland characteristics (inundated or not), evidence for
the persistence of wetness using historic information
(e.g., aerials), vegetation, soils, drainage characteristics,
uses to which the site has been subjected, and weather
and hydrologic records.
Update the Assessment accordingly as all projects need
to assess presence/absence of vernal pools, in addition
to other non-vernal pool features that may provide
suitable habitat for fairy shrimp.
6.1.2 Fairy Shrimp (FS)
FS-1. Assessment Section 6.1 states, “The site was
evaluated as described in the USFWS Survey Guidelines
for the Listed Large Branchiopods (May 31, 2016).”
Please note fairy shrimp assessments and surveys must
be conducted pursuant to the most currently accepted
protocol (i.e., USFWS Survey Guidelines for the Listed
Large Branchiopods [USFWS 2017]).” Revise accordingly.